first group campain feedback

After my first draught of social media I went to my group for feedback they said that all of my posts so far were relevant to The concept of the video, They thought that the way that I had retweeted other peoples posts was original and different too everyone else is social media, they also mentioned that the genre of the band was made clear and they could understand the type of music that they would come out with and play, things to improve on is to do a proper photo shoot to get some good quality images and get images of the band altogether and also to maybe not include photos of other bands who already have a big image for example my post on the Arctic Monkeys.


In conclusion they thought that it was a good starting point and what I've done so far was good and to carry on how I was but make it look a little bit more professional and put together which will come with the photo shoot.